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Fruity Loom.

Posted by BamikeadeyemiOBA on

She walked round the tree

fascinated by its beauty

A quick hunger sets in

She could tell by the rumbling 

In her tummy.

****

I must not eat it

It looks delicious

Her mouth salivates,

Who says you can’t, he whispers

Little did she know its venom.

She grabbed a bite,and now

Here we are in the fruity loom of lies

Caught in the web of Fallacy.

Writing 101 a poem a day.

@jdoublep. Thanks for the prompt.

Illogical nonsensical fun-Fallacy.

 

 

10 Comments Add yours

  1. Ngobesing Romanus says:
    December 14, 2015 at 12:19 pm

    I like the story.

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    1. kingsoracle says:
      December 14, 2015 at 5:46 pm

      Thanks Ngobesing.

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      1. Ngobesing Romanus says:
        December 14, 2015 at 7:30 pm

        You are welcome.

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  2. jacquelineobyikocha says:
    December 14, 2015 at 1:21 pm

    I wish I could say “don’t bite it!”

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  3. kingsoracle says:
    December 14, 2015 at 5:44 pm

    🙂 Yes oo,

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  4. moonskittles says:
    December 14, 2015 at 7:03 pm

    There are these kind of moments that draw a line between God and men.. great write my friend!

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    1. kingsoracle says:
      December 15, 2015 at 6:03 am

      I appreciate your kind words my friend. Thank you.;)

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      1. moonskittles says:
        December 15, 2015 at 6:05 am

        You are welcome Oracle! 😀

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  5. Deb says:
    December 15, 2015 at 3:10 am

    I love the last two lines…Here we are in the fruity loom of lies, Caught in the web of Fallacy…superb!

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    1. kingsoracle says:
      December 15, 2015 at 5:54 am

      Thanks Deb. 🙂

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