Fruity Loom.

She walked round the tree

fascinated by its beauty

A quick hunger sets in

She could tell by the rumbling 

In her tummy.


I must not eat it

It looks delicious

Her mouth salivates,

Who says you can’t, he whispers

Little did she know its venom.

She grabbed a bite,and now

Here we are in the fruity loom of lies

Caught in the web of Fallacy.

Writing 101 a poem a day.

@jdoublep. Thanks for the prompt.

Illogical nonsensical fun-Fallacy.



10 Comments Add yours

    1. kingsoracle says:

      Thanks Ngobesing.


  1. I wish I could say “don’t bite it!”


  2. moonskittles says:

    There are these kind of moments that draw a line between God and men.. great write my friend!


    1. kingsoracle says:

      I appreciate your kind words my friend. Thank you.;)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. moonskittles says:

        You are welcome Oracle! 😀


  3. Deb says:

    I love the last two lines…Here we are in the fruity loom of lies, Caught in the web of Fallacy…superb!


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